Did I get it right? Pls review.

bizdev · #1 (**permalink**) 06-24-2006, 09:18 PM

I'd appreciate if you could take a minute (or two) to view my new site and offer suggestions or critisism.

I've tried incorporating everything that should go into an income generating site, while providing relevant information for my target audience.

Thank you!

TMZ · #2 (**permalink**) 10-10-2006, 06:05 AM

I could not get into you site

bizdev · #3 (**permalink**) 10-10-2006, 09:21 AM

Well no wonder no one responded! Thank you for pointing out that you couldn't get in. Here is the url again:

Start Your Own Small Business Step-by-Step Kit

The site is doing well though I'm sure it could stand some improvements. I got a lot of comments about the home page being too long.

TMZ · #4 (**permalink**) 10-10-2006, 06:11 PM

Your site has a great sales letter. Brown is not my favorite color business sites but it still works. I would try to incorporate the picture better within the banner of the site. Good luck with your new site!!!

Ace · #5 (**permalink**) 10-11-2006, 06:24 AM

I agree I do not like the brown but otherwise it looks good!

mbm · #6 (**permalink**) 10-11-2006, 07:12 AM

Very good web site exactly serving the purpose for which it has been created, I think.

Which one is your picture, Silvia? There are several pretty girls on the different pages in your web site header

bizdev · #7 (**permalink**) 10-11-2006, 09:33 AM

Thank you all so much for your comments.
And actually none of the pictures is me. I've been debating that issue too. Someone commented (elsewhere) that I shouldn't have the picture of my family on the home page because it doesn't seem professional. Well, it isn't my family. I was trying to depict the "American Dream".

Thanks again everyone!

SparrowTech · #8 (**permalink**) 10-26-2006, 07:52 AM

Hi Sylvia,
On the order page, there are a couple of "Special Order" Buttons. In my browser (Firefox 1.5.0.7), the buttons cover up other text.

Nice job on the layout. Very professional. Best wishes.

Steve
Sparrow Technology

bizdev · #9 (**permalink**) 10-26-2006, 09:31 AM

Thank you Steve for pointing that out. I'll have to look into that.

MicroDots · #10 (**permalink**) 11-02-2006, 01:36 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bizdev

Thank you all so much for your comments.
And actually none of the pictures is me. I've been debating that issue too. Someone commented (elsewhere) that I shouldn't have the picture of my family on the home page because it doesn't seem professional. Well, it isn't my family. I was trying to depict the "American Dream".

Thanks again everyone!

I think the picture you used does depict the american dream. I agree with not using a photo of you or your family. The stock photo you used is really nice.

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