OK,

First, my wife, who is both an Internet Marketer and web designer, has already given me her comments. I figure none of you can be as critical as she is (LOL!!).

Anyway, I really would like feedback on several of my sites. The hosting site in particular I want to redesign so let'er rip.

My hosting business: http://www.webhosting-123.com
I realize it is a "busy" site, but we offer a heck of alot. Any ideas on how to convey the information but make it cleaner would be appreciated.

ebook site: Mostly, I'd be interested in comments on the ad copy. I'm a good designer but ad copy is not one of my strengths.
http://www.wantanonlinebusiness.com

My old fishing club: http://www.nhbayouthfoundation.org
Just cause I want them to have a great site!!

Hope that isn't too many.......

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-Rocky
http://www.webhosting-123.com
http://www.wantanonlinebusiness.com

Couple of quick comments, I think your sales letter needs to be a bit longer to convince the buyer and your webhosting site looks good though I would consider changing the buttons.

A few quick comments:

* it would be much better to have different threads for each of the web sites that needs review
* the hosting site is really too busy and looks like a godaddy reseller
* I would neve buy from the second one (from the hosting too) - they do not make me to trust you

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I agree the hosting site does look very busy.