gennif@excite.ca wrote:
>What do you think of either of these
>
>Do you enjoy doing your own bookkeeping?
>Does anybody?...
>Bookkeeping Solutions That Make Cents!
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>
Does not really make cents.
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>or
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>Where is bookkeeping ranked on your To-Do List?
>Let us put you #1 on our List.
>
>
The idea is good, but it needs work. Be more direct and less clever.
Is there anything you do better than your competitors? Anything that
makes you different or special?
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