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Old 05-29-2005, 03:28 AM
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Re: Need help with message on business card


In article <118k8t3sm8oab85@news.supernews.com>,
cliff@SPAMMER_GO_HOME_rayman.com says...
>
> gennif@excite.ca wrote:
>
> >Hello
> >
> >I'm getting new business cards designed and I would like some
> >responses to the sayings I want to put on my card.
> >
> >On the backside of the card I was thinking of putting - Bookkeeping
> >is an ongoing process for the life of the business."
> >
> >

> Doesn't mean anything. What is the main benefit of your service from
> the customer's persepective? Why should they hire you above anyone else?
>
> >But I feel like it needs something with it, a question or something.
> >Otherwise it's like yeah, so?...or is it yeah, so?
> >
> >On the front of the card I'm putting -
> >Bookkeepers are not boring people. We just get excited over boring
> >things.
> >
> >

> Nobody cares about you. And I don't mean that in a mean way, it is just
> true. Try to focus on what the customer needs and how they will benefit
> from your service. Your business is a mini advertisement, make sure you
> use it effectively.
>
> >Company name
> >My name
> >Telephone
> >Email
> >www address
> >


I agree. A lot of the advertisements that pull me in begin with something
like, "GET _______"

With "_______" being whatever it is I want or need. Like 30% off of
something, or a freebie with a purchase, or even the feeling of security
is nice.

I like to GET things - and so does everybody else. So tell us what you'll
give us!

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