It's OK. But to be honest, I don't know if you're gonna get a lot of people from that. Wanna know why?

Because it is very text based. There is practically no graphics (other than the logo). If you look at all the other ads, then you'll see there is a lot of imagery and just a small amount of text to make the reader want to learn more about the company.

You should use imagery to really grab the reader's attention. What makes your ad stand out from all the other bright and colourful ones or the Lamborghini on the other page? As your ad is now, I know that I'd just skim right past it .

Sorry if I sounded harsh, but, you have to be cruel to be kind. This however, is just my opinion, so don't go mental at me .