We have made some changes to Maid Of Honor Details >Introduction and www.bestmansite.com and were looking to get some feedback from you as to how we could improve it. Thanks in advance for your help.

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It looks like you are trying to sell an ebook. The site looks find but rather than a traditional site you may want to try to use a sales letter approach I bet your conversion rate will be higher.

I like the colors both of the sites colors would appeal to the target audience. The text looks a little difficult to read you may want to consider breaking it up a bit more.

I agree you should put more bullet points in or break it up more so it is easier for the user to follow.

Both sites load pretty slow I would look at optimizing some of the graphics

I agree with Business Watch I would change the text

You may want to consider enlarging the books a bit so you can see the covers better.

I thought both sites were really well done good luck with your venture. Did you develop them yourself or did you use a web developer?